October 12, 2026
Laura Castillo, MSN, RN, Nurse Manager, 6 West TelemetrySt. Brigid Medical CenterHouston, TX
Dear Ms. Castillo,
I'm a registered nurse with four years on a 32-bed medical-surgical unit, and I'm applying for the Telemetry RN position on 6 West. I hold an active Texas RN license, BLS and ACLS certification, and I've floated to telemetry often enough to know that's where I want to grow.
At Bayou General, I typically care for five patients per shift, many of them post-operative or managing heart failure. Two years ago I joined our unit's falls committee after a run of incidents on night shift. We introduced hourly rounding with a short bedside checklist and moved high-risk patients closer to the nurses' station. Over the next six months our unit's falls dropped from nine to three, and I now teach the checklist to every new hire.
The moment I'm proudest of was quieter. A patient two days after hip surgery told me she felt "off" but her vitals looked fine. I stayed with her, noticed a new irregular rhythm on the monitor and escalated to the rapid response team. She was moved to cardiac care with new-onset atrial fibrillation and recovered well. That experience is a big reason I want to work in telemetry full time.
I'm drawn to St. Brigid because of your nurse residency and the chest pain center designation, and because two colleagues who trained there speak highly of the unit's teamwork. I'm comfortable with Epic, I'm available for day or night rotations, and I'd welcome a shadow shift if that's part of your process. Thank you for considering my application.
Sincerely,
Grace Mensah, RN, BSN
Opening
License, certifications, years and unit type all appear in the first two sentences. Nurse managers screen for these first, so putting them up front saves the reader a search and gets you past the first filter.
Quality improvement
The falls example shows teamwork, initiative and a measurable result on the candidate's own unit. Patient safety work like this is valued in nursing, and it translates across hospitals.
Clinical judgment story
A short patient story (with no identifying details) shows assessment and escalation, which matches the critical-thinking quality BLS lists for registered nurses. It also explains why the candidate wants this specialty.
Fit with the employer
Specific reasons (residency, chest pain center, colleagues' feedback) show genuine interest. Practical details like EHR experience and shift availability answer questions the manager would otherwise ask.
Close
Offering a shadow shift shows confidence and familiarity with how many hospitals hire. It's a natural next step rather than a generic sign-off.
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